成就(accomplishments/Achievements):During my undergraduate study, my academic records kept distinguished among the whole department. I was granted First Class Prize every semester, and my overall GPA(89.5/100) ranked No.1 among 113 students. Furthermore, most of my theses are awarded Essay of the Year. Last year I took the paper-based TOEFL and got an total score of 650.
中文:在我的本科学习期间,我的理论课成绩在整个学院里始终都很突出。我每个学期都拿一等奖学金,还有我的GPA是89.5分,在113个同学中名列第一。此外,我的大多数论文都被评为年度最佳论文。去年我参加了TOEFL的笔试,总分考了650。 经验(experiences):In addition, I worked part-time for IBM and Microsoft Corporation as a software testing researcher in the research department, where they offered me the opportunity to apply classroom theory to practice in the workplace and become familiar with their organization, work style and corporate culture.
中文:我在微软和IBM的研究部门做过兼职软件测试员。在那里它们给我提供了一个把课堂理论运用到工作实践中的机会,并且也给我提供了一个熟悉它们的组织结构、工作风格和公司文化的机会。 兴趣(academic interests and Other interests):My academic interests and passions are in social policy and social justice, and I am thinking about social welfare research too. I would like to pursue these passions on a national level and eventually on an international level. And, I would like to start this pursuit while completing my Master and PhD. My hobbies are swimming, reading books, and cooking.
中文:我的学术兴趣和热情在社会政策和社会正义上,并且也一直在思考社会福利研究。我想在国内层面,最终在国际层面追求这些酷爱。我想在开始这些最求的同时完成我硕士和博士学位。我的业余爱好是游泳、读书和烹调。 个性(character/personality):I like long-range planning, working by myself, sometimes working on a team, and being the master of my own destiny.
中文:我喜欢做长期打算;独立工作;有时也喜欢团队工作;我喜欢自己掌握自己的命运。
未来目标(future goals):Once I graduate from the University of Cambridge, I would like to become a loan officer for a little while. I am an entrepreneur at heart and would like to open up a business of my own. I hope to have a further study and continue to do my research work if I succeed in obtaining the engineering scholarship.
中文:等我在剑桥大学毕业了,我会先作一段时间信贷员。我内心很想成为一个企业家,从而开创自己的事业。我希望能进一步地学习,继续我的研究工作,如果我能成为地获得工程学奖学金的话。
强项或长处(strengths):My strengths include creativity and ingenuity, excellent strategizing skills, self-control and self-regulation ability, love of learning, and open-mindedness. My level of knowledge or ability is adequate, but I wish to excel. For me, the five key strengths are ranked as follows: gratitude, optimism, zest, curiosity, ability to love and be loved.
中文:我的强项包括独立创新能力、卓越的策划能力、自我控制和自我调整能力、爱学习、思想开明。我的知识和能力是足够的,但我喜欢超越。对于我,下边列出了我的五个强项:感恩、乐观、热情、好奇心、爱与被爱的能力。 弱点(weaknesses/shortcomings):As for my weaknesses, I feel that I am prone to take on a very heavy workload, and I stick to my guns about my own work, but I would like to take criticism carefully and a great deal of reflection.
中文:至于我的弱点,我觉得我倾向于承担非常重的工作量,并且我对于我自己的工作固执己见,但我愿意认真地接受别人的批评,并且做出大量的反思。
感谢语(acknowledgement): I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your classes, and I think that your classes will leave a permanent imprint on my heart. Thank you so much for your willingness to share with us your wealth of knowledge. You are the inspiration for my career. Thanks a lot. Thank you for your kind assistance. I really appreciate that you took so much time to acquaint me with the company.
中文:我仅仅想让你知道我是多么地喜欢你的课堂,我认为你的课堂将永远留在我的心中。非常感谢你愿意同我们一起分享你的知识财富。你鼓舞着我的一生。非常感谢!谢谢你友好的帮助。
结束语(Ending):I have asked Professors john McCarthy, Robert Gilpin and John Kingston to send you letters of recommendation. The attachment is in Acrobat PDF format, so if you have any problem in opening it, please let me know and I can send you a hard copy. Copies of my certificates and credentials will be sent to you under separate cover(ad.在另函中). Please look over the enclosed/attached resume, which provides more details about my background. I will arrange to come in for(v.接受) an interview at your convenience. I am more than willing to answer any of your questions concerning my application and research. Thank you for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. With best wishes for the festive season. I would be grateful if you would send me a graduate catalog of your university and any other necessary information, and also a set of application forms for admission. Would you please send me the application forms for admission and financial support? Thank you again for the opportunity to interview for the marketing position. I appreciated your hospitality and enjoyed meeting you and members of your staff. I look forward to hearing from you to arrange for an interview at your earliest convenience. I look forward, Mr. Weatherby, to hearing from you concerning your hiring decision. Again, thank you for your time and consideration.