Dear Amy, |
称呼:写给关系亲密的个人 |
I have learned with delight that you have graduated from Beijing University. I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your completing Dr. Degree. You must be very proud of your achievements. And I feel very happy for you. |
第一句陈述祝贺的缘由,即交代写信背景。 (积累:with delight; graduate from…) 第二句是全文的中心句,表达自己真挚的祝贺。 (积累:extend to …my utmost congratulation on…) 第三句想象收信人的心情,第四句表达了写信人自己的心情。因此,这两句话记述的都是内心活动。 (积累:be proud of…; feel happy for…) |
Receiving doctorate in such a famous university is quite exciting news! I know this is surely owing to years of hard work you’ve done. It is a reward you richly deserve for your extraordinary ability. |
第一句是本段的中心句。再次为收信人的成绩感到振奋。 第二、三句展开论述中心句:为什么这个成绩很令人振奋?第二句强调的是收信人的努力;第三句强调的是收信人的能力。 (积累:owe to…; It is a reward you deserve for…) |
Kindly let me know when you are free. I hope to pay you a personal visit. My best wishes for your further success. |
第一、二句进一步扩展祝贺,提出想登门道喜的意愿。(积累: pay… a visit) 信件收尾,表达写信人的真诚祝福! |
Yours sincerely, Li Ming |
信件结尾和署名 |